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CONGLATURATION!!! YOU HAVE COMPLETED A GREAT GAME. AND PROOVED THE JUSTICE OF OUR CULTURE. NOW GO AND REST OUR HEROES!
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First of, Congratulations is spelled wrong, so that's ten points off. "You have beaten a great game?" That's just plain wrong. Even if it was a great game, they don't need to say it. So that's 30 points off. Then you got an extra "O" in proved. And proved what? The Justice of our culture? 20 more points off. Also, there's no comma after rest. So instead of saying "Go and Rest, our heroes," it says go and rest our ****ing heroes. Which brings us to a...
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